I'm sure the author worked hard on this story. But why do so many of these "true stories" have no punctuation, spacing or grammar corrections?
I was bread by the dog
It's only 3 in Long
It's very tiring to read despite being completely unrealistic.
I'd suggest using Grammerly.com next time
The story is well done in concept and I like where you were going. But some words don't match the story and tone. For example vagina is a clinical word and is rarely used in a porn story. If you're not a native English speaker look in slang dictionaries to find alternative words. Keep up the...
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